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Witness to the folding machines...

One thousand Naughty little witches hats plucked
from mother earth at the break of dawn...

"Fresh... Ready for the journey ahead"


We stare in wonder while the bubbles cooked in the pot
Purple clouds rolling and rolling over each other.
Nervous but ready to expand our wanting minds
we share the the magic potion between ourselves.

"Waiting... Anticipating the moment"


My approaching Trip ripples across the carpet
and splashes across the walls of my senses.
I have no control and want out of this situation
but there is never any turning back from a Trip.

 

"Remember your fate is sealed in the deal with mother earth"

Excepting... The rush, the visions
I fall into the biggest sofa on the planet,
lights flickering at my command.


Mankind's plastic planet does not fit, access denied,
whilst I stare at the revolving controls, inwards, outwards,

numbers spinning, but no plastic works here.


"My world... My area, my trip on a moving ship"

Mother nature opens her doors and shows me her beating pulse
rushing through the leaves of the plants and trees. "Magic"
But the ugliness of mankind's domain seeps back and takes control
with vengeance, Witness to plastic folding machines.
Numbers spinning entwining with each other, time is irrelevant
in this domain... This does not belong with beauty...

 

The weatherman speaks of the coming plague and develops

a rash on my "Thirty foot T.V"

 

I want to change the channel but the thousands of buttons

spinning around wont allow this to happen.

A crystal ship floats by, the crew start laughing at me

Zoooooom it's gone!

"Cigarettes... Appear everywhere longer than your arm"


I spark a light from my protruding finger which ripples
into a thousand speckles, but never lights the cigarette.


The plants seem bored with my antics and wave to me with gestures,
my laughter echo's through the walls and bounces faster and faster
off into the black dot on the wall.

"The door... Another Door"


Whispers come from the door and grab at my senses
wobbling like jelly my legs start walking towards the door.

 

I follow... Further and further but the door disappears
nothing but a black dot, Am I dead?
There is nothing but me and the darkness...

"The final rush... Snap, Bang, K.O. who knows..."


Nature plants me back into the world of the living,
and plants the seed of remembrance in my mindset for future reverence
My journey finally stops, or has it just begun?

 

 

 

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NOTES...

"Magic Mushrooms" I believe is natures way of showing us the earth's inner self... I would not recommend this journey to anyone, for the main reasons of over doing the Mushroom levels!!
If people want to see pretty colors, then 30 to 50 Mushrooms will get them there...

Also it is bloody cold at 6am in the morning around September / October time, and you have to beat the cows to the mushrooms.

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  • this is really good. it reminds me of the experience that i had with shrooms. although i wish that i was high while i was reading this (i woul dhave givven me a better visual), i thought that it was amazing. nice job. good luck in my contest


  • writeroftoast
    November 25, 2008

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    Extremely odd, but in a good feeling kind of way. I thought it was well thought out. Good luck in the contest.


  • Age of Rain
    October 9, 2008
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    Weird, but I like it.


  • Rizzie
    September 15, 2008

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    this is amazing. i've yet to get off my meds so i can experience a trip but this is beyond mystical and seems so enlightening the way you put it. thanks for the wonderful write


  • redhanded
    May 5, 2008

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    wow...

    this is a very very neat piece you have here...its like " a trip down the old rabbit hole" once you read the whole thing...I really like your word choice and it flows very nicely....thankyou for entering and best of luck to you in this contest and the future as well...
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    March 4, 2008
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    yes - a spycho, finely portrayed trip. Fantastic work!!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    January 20, 2008
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    Most interesting trip! Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!!!

    Az


  • leander Moderators member
    January 6, 2008

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    This is quite a long poem you've written here, but I enjoyed it actually this gave me something like a fairytale-feeling
    thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • Oleander
    December 6, 2007
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    awesome poem! I loved it.


  • risewiththesmoke
    December 2, 2007
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    thanks for etnering


  • PerfectTonight
    November 17, 2007

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    That was very amusing, I loved it. The imagery was great, I loved that you take the reader on a warped little adventure. Thanks for entering my contest!!


  • Aura of night
    November 15, 2007

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    Very mystical

    This is a very mystical poem, I like how you describe the whole 'trip' you are having. Using witches nad such..amking it very fairytale like. Love the description.


  • Griswold
    November 13, 2007
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    very nicely done best of luck to you in this contest...Scott


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 12, 2007

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    Wtf? That was bizzare and perfect for this contest. I really liked it. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.


  • Perfiction
    November 12, 2007

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    This poem was intriguing, kind of having the thoughts of you quitting smoking or something. But the length is a little bland. I forgot the start when I was at the end and had to re-read.
    But the imagery is simply gorgeous where you use it and the confusion of topics is brilliant. The meaning comes out more near the end but also still has a little confusion. I feel it would really benefit from some slight chopping and editing to help the flow and also the imagery.
    But apart from that, I really enjoyed it.


  • angel-lover
    November 12, 2007
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    wow long interesting and different

  • luvdrkchocolate
    November 10, 2007

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    Oh. This is a pretty cool poem that you have written here. I really liked this one. It is really weird and a first I thought you were talking about being a wicca and later in the poem I thought you were talking about being in a dream of some sort or something. I thought it was pretty cool. You did a great job in expressing yourself here.


    • Timespell
      November 10, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting...
      "Magic Mushrooms" I believe is natures way of showing you her innerself... I would not recommend this journey to anyone, for the main reasons of over doing the Mushroom levels!!
      If people want to see pretty colours, then 30 to 50 Mushrooms will get them there...

      Also it is bloody cold at 6am in the morning around September / October time, and you have to beat the cows to the mushrooms.

      *Milks good for you, you know...LOL

      Thanks for reading.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • opaqueangel
    November 9, 2007

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    Wow this is very interesting, and almost wimsical. It is deffinatly an odd experience as well as a very personal one, to each there own eh? I can't say that I can really relate though, I have never experienced these sensations caused by these sort of halusinagentics, or any for that matter, but this was a very well written peice and for a moment I was able to atleast a bit see through your eyes and share this experience with you. I really like the why you wrote this and was able to keep the attention of the reader, left wondering qwhat happens next at the end of each sentence. Great job and good luck in the contest!

    • Timespell
      November 10, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for reading... Well what can I say? H'mmm. 8 hours is a longtime on the otherside of reality. Again 4 hours good 4 hours Bad buzz, but the experiance will stay with me forever. All in all it made me appreciate nature and all it's beauty, and made me start questioning Mankinds interverance with Mother Nature.

      Thanks for reading glad you like this *TRUE STORY*

      All the best,

      ~Timespell~


  • Sachiro k-Saruto
    November 7, 2007

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    wonderous

    this piece was a pleasure to read. i love the way that you had fun with and made something creative and unique. it felt more like a story than a poem but, never the less, it still amazed me with a brilliant shining of creativity and lovely-ness that is second to none.
    descriptions were well thought out and i could actually picture things that were happening in the story.




    ----write lots more like this----
    ~~Sachiro K.~~

    • Timespell
      November 10, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and leaving an understanding comment. This is how it was. The only way to explain the Trip and the effects of the 8 hour journey. Would be to say that it was 50% good and opened my mind to beautiful things of Nature. and 50% Bad which was dominated by mankinds Plastic technology!

      Thanks again for reading.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Uncle Jimmy
    November 6, 2007

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    Whoa!

    As I read this the first time, I wondered what you were tripping on.
    Then I saw the Psychedelic contest entry thing at the bottom. As a trip, good job.

    • Timespell
      November 7, 2007
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      LOL... Yes it must of come across pretty mess up bit of poetry. Maybe it still does...Hahaha, Things like this stay in your mind for ever, just a reminder of the 8 hour journey.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • opaqueangel
    November 6, 2007
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    this is not a rewards poem. fix in 24 hours. questions? message me!

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