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Dead End

Darkened alley ways,
shadowed streets,
you shouldn't be out,
not on your own.

Turn a corner,
footsteps echo,
hurry sweetheart
I'm following.

Down another street,
darker than before,
heartbeat quickens,
Oh no, there's a wall.

Dead end,
trace your steps,
straight towards me,
I'm getting closer.

Paniced steps,
your scream,
my laugh,
you found me.

Darkened alley ways,
shadowed streets,
shouldn't have been out,
not on your own.

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  • Unearthed-Angel
    November 10, 2007

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    Woo i love this poem kate it is very good!! im so stupid i ddint even realise you wrote a new one lol. *claps hands* love it!!
    Luv Tam xxx