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* Milestone*

 

 

                                            

 

 

birthdays are always a milestone in life,

a day of merriment and celebration;

forget all troubles, forget all strife,

surround yourself with love and adoration;

 

 

 

silver is the color of twenty-five,

halfway to 24karat solid gold;

it is the time when you finally arrive,

dreams to pursue, as they unfold;

 

 

may this day be only the beginning,

of whichever path you may choose;

may you walk each step towards winning,

you have it all to gain and nothing to loose;

 

so on this day, may you eat cake,

and dance like you never did before;

may the sun shine upon you as you wake,

follow it to see what the future has in store;

 

 

                              

 *  Happy Birthday *

 

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  • Liquid memories
    November 9, 2007
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    touchingly beautiful. I was thinking of another type of milestone, one that was tied around a bad persons neck and thrown into the ocean. this was filled with a sweetness that captures the imagination. very nice and I was enveloped by this one.


  • Rita Krocha
    November 5, 2007

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    Very Beautiful
    Love its contents. And oh even the pic.....
    I especially like the last stanza though that's not to say the rest are not worth mentioning.
    Thank You for entering!


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Ahhh me Reenie, such a sweet poem you have penned here. Silver, then gold, then like me "rust" LOL!

    hey, just think, another three years or so and you can celebrate your Silver birthday???

    and they'll STILL card you me dear.



    len