To tell you the truth,
it's finished.
All these things we say we're living for,
what we say we're dying for,
insignificant
Merely what we've learned,
merely what we've been to taught to say,
we've been told to think,
the same.
It's never going to change.
We're never going to change.
We've succombed to the level,
the truth is abasing.
We've chosen to live with it.
Ignorant to the reality.
Never stopping to think.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Plain, simple, and straight to the point...I like it. You made a good point though. It sometimes seems like people are never going to change and that its always gonna be about one track thinking. Although personally I don't believe that everyone is like this, although a vast majority of people are...
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I like it. It was good. It was very plain and I thought you could of used better words, but The flow of the poem was easy flowing. I was never lost in it which is good. Well that was a good write and i hope you continue! good job.
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