Pain.
What is Pain?
The mirror to your soul.
Pain can change you
Make you sad
But at the end
When pain is gone
your back to being big and strong
Children's pain
Can break your heart
You rock, you sing
you fall apart
God gives the pain and takes it away.
God is Love
God is Pain
The mirror to your soul.
Author notes
This is not my poem. This is one written by my grandmother, Lydia C. Kucic. I posted this poem from a book in which it was published. This posting is dedicated to her. My grandmother is currently in the hospital with 4 different diseases; breast cancer, Leupus (loo-puss) if you cant read that, Arthritus, and Diabetes. I posted this poem in her honor. You can read her poem in the poetry book 'Through The Hourglass' page 108 third poem to the right. Thank You for reading.
Written October 16th, 2003
A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 17, 2004, 40 entries
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Thanks for commenting on this ambular. I appreciate the wishes. 
She was a wanderful poet as well. 
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oh wow..this is wonderdul and sweet...what a great dedication to your grandmother, I wish her all of the best....
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Wonderful poem. Wonderfully written as well. I like it a lot. And I honestly think anyone could relate to this piece. Thank you for sharing it
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morrors and souls..they see it all. i hope your g- mas it at ease! i enjoyed this poem its short but says so much..tell her good write..!
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wow awesome write!!! it is so emotional and very well put together this is one of those poems you want to read over and over to get the feeling out of it!!! good luck
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This poem is very Inceptive. Sparks so many dirrent things in your head. Things that you had never known exist...Secrets lost inside your soul...
This poem is so great, and I want to thank you for entering my contest...I love this poem...Although because it was not your peice of work it cannot win a trophy...I'm sorry
I just think that it makes it fair to everyone else...But if you want to you could put one of your own poems on here for me to be able to judge...
Good luck with your grandma...I know how hard this is...
My Grandma died and 10 pm on new years eve...from many sicknesses...So good luck with that
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Hm.. We have so many nicknames, don't we now? Shu shu, Kiks. Xx' BB... Aie.. I don't forget >.>; Sissa Kikyo ^^ Anyways, Shura, Good Write. Well, for your grams. I know what all happened, and am sorry. I believe very much you got a lot from her. Especially in your poetry talent ^^ As it shows with every poem YOU write. That's also a very thoughtful thing to do. >.> sorry i've been slow on reading and 'viewing *now gets -2 applauds* Xx -
Wow, I don't know how 13 year olds learn to write like this, but DarkAngel you are ONE COOL CHICK. Points to you.
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>> Im sorry to hear about thine grandmother, it is a beautiful poem though, I hope she knows that. she must be a beautiful person. * Bows * <<
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Shu shu i liked that sooo much.
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awww thats sweet. good write. tell your grandma thats she a very good poet. hope you the happest time with your grandma.
SPY
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What a lovely thought and tribute to your grandmom. May both you and her still be able to spend lots of happy moments together . She must be so proud to have a grandchild like you
Reenie
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Oh tell ur grandma to hang in there i lost my auntie to Lukimia and it hurts. this is very great and very deep
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Kikyo! your so mean! dont call me Shu Shu anymooooore!
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Wow, that is so nice that you put this up for her. It sounds like your grandmother was a very intuitive woman and it is quite moving and a great tribute to her that you would put her poem on your page.
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VERY good Shura keep up the GREAT work..wow thats good Shu Shu!!!!
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