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Never Enough

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Whisper my name again
As my lips caress you
Beneath your chin

Slowly gliding along the

Contour of your frame

And keep your eyes closed

Pretending you’re vulnerable and

Exposed because I

Want the excitement
To nearly drive you insane.

I must confess to you my dear
That after all these years
I yet crave you with

An insatiable desire,

For my love for you is pure

And of this, you can be sure,

That nothing

Will ever quench this fire.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 29, 2008
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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Well...why haven't I read you before? I suppose I shall now! Thanks again!


    Az


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 2, 2008

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    Oh my!!! *wipes brows*

    Now that was just very sensual and I absolutely love the passion you expressed in this... especially the second stanza... wow!!

    Ahem... I seriously have to stop reading these writes of yours!!


  • Stardust100
    December 10, 2007
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    Great write I love it excellent


  • marciep
    December 6, 2007
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    wow...great poem and detail


  • SandraMVeinot
    November 16, 2007
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    true love as in true marridge never dies, only gets pressed hard against with the strains of life that comes and goes...but it's always there when we seek for it to be renewed in it's oneness......thank you a gain...


    ....a nicely expressed write from your pen again...


  • Symphonie
    November 10, 2007

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    Wow. I really liked this piece. I mean... the way you wrote it with such passion and need really made me wonder if my computer was like... going to get caught on fire or something. Way awesome. I loved it.


  • volition08
    November 7, 2007

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    i really enjoy reading this piece my favorite was "keep your eyes closed,
    and pretend you’re vulnerable"
    it shows real love of giving one your knowing that they could break it but trusting they wont


  • michichoeret
    November 5, 2007
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    great


  • stavykm gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    Very Nice

    Yes it is true to a strong marriage, is to alwys strive to keep the love alive. Liked the notes. So this is a wonderful poem. Yes the excitement was there which is so important. Yes I love this poem very much. I do feel romanced the title Never Enough is perfect there never is enough. I just wish he was romantic with words. I might be asking for to much then. The first line Whisper My name again is wonderful, I remember when he would do that and the last line nothing will ever quench this fire. Wonderful Write the title and first and last lines embrace this poem to a competion. Thank you and I wish you well in the contest!! Kelle Marie, stavykm

  • goalsv
    November 4, 2007
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    Beautiful and loving poem. Very good words from one spouse to the other.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    This is really a wonderful piece. You and your wife are very blessed to have such a love. I wish you all the best in the contest. Cathy


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    Nothing will ever quicnh its fire...ahh to be in love like you have my friend I envy! But, I think and pray that this new one might be...we shall see! ~Sie

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