She'll never understand
The way I feel
When I took my stand
But yet still had to kneel
It was hard for me
going through all the pain
As if hard to believe
I wasn't going insane
I Thought all this time
She was for me
But man forget that
In My Dreams
I wish I was the perfect guy
But it took time to realize
That nobody is perfect in life..
Early In the Morning, November 3, 2007
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This is really good! I like that it has a message, which a lot of poetry don't have these days. I like the realization in this poem. Keeping it real. Good job!
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I really like this.
And the messege it sends out.
Thats why the ending is my favorite.
I wish I was the perfect guy
But it took time to realize
That nobody is perfect in life
Good job, but you didnt put your name in the authors comments, or your opition number.
Good luck in my contest.
-Erin -
The message you finish this poem with, is one that most people tend to forget unfortunately... Nobody is perfect indeed, and if it would exist, then perfect is different from person to person.
Well written, thank you for entering the contest
I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
i really liked ths piece,
but you need to edit your authors ntes according to the rules, thank you [=
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I like it. So raw and honest. Good job!
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You're so right; nobody is perfect in life. We all habe our ups and downs, good and bad, happy times and dark. Don't expect yourself to be a perfect anything for anybody. Just be who you are inside and if some people can't or won't accept it, it's their problem. Nicely written poem. You express yourself freely and honestly which is a good thing. Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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