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Spring

A new beginning
A bold, new, green shoot
Almost invisible
Just poking through
So much potential
For happiness, or pain
Don't know which it will be
But it's time to find out!

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  • soulfultia gold member
    November 25, 2007

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    Geeeeeeeeeeeez, I wanna be where you are! We are just heading into what seems as if it is going to be a cold, cold winter! Love the write ~Tia

  • Liquid memories
    November 12, 2007
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    you writing about spring and this is Autumn, are you hurrying things? just wondering. Good to see you active again, as I have missed you. hope you are well and feeling better and life is kind to you.


    • pickers silver member
      November 12, 2007
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      Don't be so US-centric! It's Spring in Australia, dude!!!

      • Liquid memories
        November 12, 2007

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        well, we do seem to make where we live the important season, chickie. or could i say duckie! sorry about that, no offense meant.


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    November 5, 2007
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    Double Sounding good there and sooo great to see you writing again.

    Linda


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Yay ! !

    I can read between the lines here Shazz I think the potential for happiness is what is forecast here Well penned my friend. It's good to see something from you. It's been too long

    • pickers silver member
      November 4, 2007
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      Just like grass after a long period without rain, I too can bounce back remarkably well. I can't wait to tell you all about it. Thanks for the comment and hugs and happy clappies!


      • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
        November 4, 2007

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        You are most welcome Shazz. You DO INDEED deserve to be happy I can't wait to catch up with you


  • A falling star
    November 4, 2007

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    It's spring over there? We're almost in winter!

    I'm glad you wrote something again

    And it's good too!

    • pickers silver member
      November 4, 2007
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      Thank you Star! Yes, it's Spring and yes I'm back. I've been busy, up, down, broken hearted and now I'm happy again. Single, but with hope of someone new (and improved) on the horizon! I'm still busy, but when I get more time I'll write you some more comments too. I love your work poems!

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