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Glass-poet's Apologies







Uttered letters
of silken dreams,

that lay
undone
within
a touch,

leaving traced
'sorry's

-- unsaid --






















A contest entry

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  • Namita
    November 4, 2007
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    That is so cute. Wonderfully done, Asfand. Great write. Good luck in the contest.

    ~KK


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Beautifully done with such wonderful imagery

    Lynda


  • Lavender Butterfly
    November 4, 2007

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    Very detailed and immensely expressive. Deeply captivating and filled with meaning. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.