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Shattered.

Caught in time,
Life shattered too early.
Young at death
She stays and watches forever.

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  • Just4u
    October 22, 2008
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    From the corner she is peeking
    watching all that does go on
    In the silence she is creeping
    for still here she does belong

    In the creaking of the floorboards
    In the squeaking of the doors
    You will see that she is present
    and will be forevermore...

    Have a lovely week...

    Eddy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 4, 2007

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    Dark and intensely grasping. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • ZachP gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    ooh, a darker twist
    nicely scribed, and good luck