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Numbered Days

The days are numbered,
the light fades into the twilight,
beckoning to my life's end;
each second is closer to death,
my freedom slips away with each moment,
the clock ticks closer to my apocalypse -
my doom is near,
the dreaded day shall come
and put a stop to the fairy tale -
my fate is at hand.

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