breath in
breath out
breath in
breath out
breath in
now hold it
life takes it tole's
this to you
i hope you know
living sheltered
being watched over
never take my eyes from your face
this i realized
you see i'm not ordinary
or extra ordinary
maybe extraordinary
but now to close to walk away
i am not going to die just to speak this way
my heart
my soul
fell my mind
my scares
i made for you
to much trust
to much hope
hope
even hope
its all gone
now it has been to long since i have heard your voce
to long since i have seen your face
and at last
i will let you hear my voice
i once believed in angles
and that was how i once saw to you
now i see my demons
no angles there to stop them
in the moonlight of this night i say my final goodnight
something shiny presses to my skin
and only a blackish red ooze shows my last goodbye
on my wall i leave my last goodbye
breath in
breath out
breath in
breath out
bre...
Author notes
i have not wrote a poem like this in so long my past mixed with my life today i hope the read ish good
A contest entry
- Catch My Eye Or Lose It All (Quickie) by WarmHeartedGeisha.
360 points, ended November 5, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love oyur poetry its great good job on this poem
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Well this is really really good, u kept me interested, and it also flowed well, and its just a great write. Good luck
~Lorissa~
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