Those times when I'm alone,
When I feel no one hears me,
I know you are there.
Sometimes I just want to scream,
To make them notice me,
But when it all comes down to it in the end,
It doesn't matter.
I know you hear me,
I know that you understand what I feel.
Thank you Lord,
Thank you for being there.
For always watching over me
And for never leaving.
You'll be the one constant in my life.
For this I thank you and love you.
Forever and always you'll be my God
And forever and always you'll be there.
A contest entry
- Christian Poems of Spirituality by jjbreunig3.
8500 points, ended November 17, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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An enjoyable piece...
An enjoyable piece; we all experience those moments of loneliness - don't let them consume you; faith is a powerful agent that assists us to move beyond circumstance; thankfully, He is always there. --Joe
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Sentiments easy to read and understand in these lines -lots of you and me's in these two verses; not sure if some could be left out or not. God is there for all, they just need to have faith.
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So true indeed
He is the power that holds our very fiber together no mater what may come our way he is there
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very true heart feeling statement
i love this almost reminded me of a special person huge points good luck in the contest -
The first stanza explains the background very clearly - there is loneliness, fear etc. and it provides that reader with exactness of human feeling. Your second stanza the revelation - what you hold on to what you believe and the 'promise' you make. I enjoyed its honesty and openness - its offers both hope and strength. Good luck with the contest. FransB
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Beautifully written...the flow was amazing and every line was breathtaking...awesome job!!!!
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awesome
i can feel your words deep down inside of me , yes it is true that we feel all alone sometimes and mayse we don't realize that the lord is up there watching over us and feeling our pain as well and he even hurts knowing that we do but all we have to do is start talking to him and he is more that willing to listen to us along with all the tens of thousands of angels with him as well , even though sometimes we feel alone the lord is always there
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Faith is powerful
When you believe as you have written, there is a peace that is found. Peace of mind and spirit. faith can move mountains, This is a wonderful prayer and poem, The Shaker
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NIce,
Sometimes I really wonder if those I think care, really do.. I guess that kind of answers my question in itself. Thanks for sharing, all the best in this contest. Peace~
-Timothy
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Yes, the One reliable constant in our ever-changing lives and circumstances. Well written praise.
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