Golden curls
adorned atop your
luminescent face-
you are a sun god
spreading your glow
throughout the land.
But I am a daughter
of the mystical moon
meant to live
in your absence.
I sometimes hang
in the blue sky,
in your time,
and I can
quiver in your heat
and revel in
your bright glare.
I only shine
when you look at me.
I only shine
when you look at me.
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Comments
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beautiful poem!!!
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ooo i like this write. very nice. thanks for entry and good luck!
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Very beautiful poem about the sun and moon, very rich in imagary and all in this was fantastc piece, thank you so much for entering.
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