Feeling the warmth of your body
Focusing on the softness of your skin
Allowing my fingers to glide slowly through your thin hair
Inhaling the sweet scent of no other
Our two bodies slowly becoming one
The drops of sweat that form on your brow
How you hold me like it's forever
Even though forever is just right now
Your hands move down my tender thighs
I hear you groan, and then you sigh
I know that I am afraid to let go
And I seem to be afraid to lose
Maybe it's just I am afraid to need....
I've decided that I am afraid to love
I see the hunger in your eyes
Can feel the passion on your lips
You move my hand up to your face
And gently kiss my fingertips
Your hot breath covers my neck
My hands pressed into your back
Slowly covering me in soft kisses
I let all my senses go
Too tired to go on
I feel your firm grip begin to slow
I roll over on my bed
To realize that I am alone
Wasn't this my fear?
Faintly I can still smell your cologne
Was I reliving a night of passion?
Why did I have to wake up?
It was so real and full of love
Your embrace I still feel around me
I knew it couldn't last forever
Closing my eyes to envision
The two of us together
I suppose that now it's over
I can wipe my tears away
If I could have only shown how much I loved you
Than maybe you would have chosen to stay
A contest entry
- BIG POINTS FOR LOVE, PASSION AND SEDUCTION! by freebutsafe.
1800 points, ended November 17, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sex Or Love?? by Miss Kristy.
360 points, ended November 27, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Even if the love is gone, the heartbreak is always there... by WhenWillsCollide.
1063 points, ended November 9, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - dark LOVE, sad, desperate love... by Selene Tremere.
400 points, ended March 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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the last lines took me a bit by surprise...I enjoyed the read
thanks for entering and good luck inthe contest ^^
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Now this is me all over...!!! I know this feeling only too well...your timing is perfect...lol.
Oh the pain...and the feeling of 'what is wrong with me'! (They'll never know our real reasons for whom we are and why it is, we choose, this way to love!) In the end it's all about finding the real you, and being content to be alone. We all make mistakes, and if we think of them that way...it never hurts! Great write! I loved the way it rhymed here and there, I'm sure there is a name for that? Thank-you for entering my contest and good luck!
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Beautiful
I loved the poem very much. kept me glued to my seat, I thought that it was very beautiful & sensual at the same time. I had no idea that it was just a dream. I felt some sadness while reading this also. my favorite stanza was the last one:
I suppose that now it's over
I can wipe my tears away
If I could have only shown how much I loved you
Than maybe you would have chosen to stay
good luck in the contest.
Kat
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I loved the poem but I feel this is too sensual and loving for this contest. I enjoyed reading it but I have to foloow the rules I set forth and remove it. I apologize, maybe you could write something more erotic and re-enter. still this poetry is great! and thank you for entering.
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Was it a dream?
A sense of longing and good use of detail. Very nice. -
wow.
this was a great write
If i hadnt read hte end, I would have never had any idea that it was just a dream
very well done, I love twisted endings
I see the hunger in your eyes
Can feel the passion on your lips
You move my hand up to your face
And gently kiss my fingertips
these lines are very strong and I think they capture hte emotion you are trying to get across.
well done -
beautiful
This poem brought me to tears this is so me and my boyfriend on our first night and how I have felt so many nights without him. Thank you it is so perfectly expressed.
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OMG! noooo.... but but... nooo, that couldn't have been just a dream? Awww~ sigh~ I do feel what you're saying... hmmm... who knows what would've been... well, gl on the contest
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This is so touching, and sad. I really do love the title, it bring so much into it.
Very gorgeous
Very stunning write!
x x x
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wowzers! This is really great. So much passion in this piece and I can feel your wanting of this person. I think you have done a terrific job here and wish you well in the contest!
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