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g to the ground
Sculpting the trees in pearly white
Creating a symphony with nary a sound
A silent Sonata of pure delight
White velveteen now covering the land
Fitting the earth like a glove to a hand
A contest entry
- WINTER by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended January 11, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thankyou for entering. I hope you enjoy the contest and have fun.
take care
message me for anything
Rhythm Child
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c a s c a d i n g
great word choice...and artfully fitting layout
the world through your eyes is beautiful and joyful
and infused with god
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Thank you! Your comments are appreciated! Pam
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You are an inspiration! Just that "cascading" cascading. Excellent.
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Thank you FreeSpirit53! Glad you liked it!
Pam
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Soft sad and sweet
Your heart is open and tenderly sweet and pure my lovely friend you are all woman, and all that a man seeks in a woman; you look at life and you see, only the beauty that surrounds you; my ways have become dark; you help me to breathe again: re-ignite the spark of lost innocence...oh to be a child again...someday I shall be...
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Thank you John! It is true...I'm the eternal optimist and I see the good in most everything! As for you dear soul, it takes the smallest amount of light to overcome the dark you know...you can be what you want John. You will never become happy-you can only be happy.
I'll send you a message about that.***Pam***
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great
you make snow sound so white and pure
to me snow always turns dirty muddy
must be point of view.
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lol! Of course you are quite right...the snow does turn muddy and brown. But when it is fresh and newly fallen it is magnificantly beautiful! That's the only time I like it! ***Pam***
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Hmmmm...very nice. Great imagery here. I can really appreciate the scene you let 'play out'. I sounded 'quietly delightful'. I liked the 'cascading' effect...good touch there.
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You are so right.
You are so right in your description of snow and the way that you did this piece is lovely. I liked this little piece of beauty this morning.
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Thank you CountryCousin! A fresh snow fall is a beauty to behold. But I must confess to being quite happy that summer is here! ***Pam***
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for as the softness covers the land and the sweet white does take the upper hand...the coolness of the snow astounds and the beautiful symphony makes nary a sound...sighs...just breath taking! Niaish for sharing with me
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Thank you Tender Wolf...I appreciate this from one whom I believe appreciates the things of nature. ***Pam**
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wow!!
this is beautiful!! i love the cascading part!!love the imagery!! much much love!!!
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Thanks so much for your lovely comment on my poem! ***Pam***
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Stunningly-beautiful piece this is. Wonderful flow. Imagery is superb. You are very very good. Keep writing.
Much love to you
Wayne Leon
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My favourite line is the last line. Very original alalogy. I like these poems which have a visual creativity to compliment the content. I've seen a few lately and am inspired to fashion one myself now.
alby
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Thank you for such a nice comment on my poem!
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I love this! What a nice picture I have of that beautiful snow! Great job!
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this was amazing
i loved this
your great at description
i loved the images i got from this poem
wonderfuly done
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Thanks again raggyann...it snowed quite suddenly one day early in the season and the world was cast into a magical winter wonderland! ***Pam***
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beauty touches within nature
and doing so enhances the heart and the soul!
have me smiling with is!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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beautiful visions of a fresh snowfall...I can only hope that we don't get this in southern Alberta for a few more weeks lol I know it's coming...
Wonderful read.
Rory
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Thanks!
Southern Alberta eh?! I live in B.C. It snowed here that one day out of the blue, and it snowed a lot! But, it all melted and we have had none since. But it's a comin'!!! Pam
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This has such a creative presence here and beautifully crafted, also. thanks for entering
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Magical!
The magic of waking up to a winter wonderland dusted with its pristine mantle of pure white snow brings thoughts of christmas celebrations and happy holidays...I like this write hunny..its very good indeed..well done...love you..Dan xxxx
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Thank you!
Fresh snow is always so beautiful and magical!
Just like you! xxxPam
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WOW! I am not looking to winter but this work gets you in the mood for it. NICE JOB!!
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Thanks Pat...winter came here with a bang the other day. It snowed and snowed! I wasn't looking forward to it just yet! It is beautiful when everything is newly covered with fresh snow. Not so nice for driving though! Thanks for your comment! Pam
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snowflakes all have their own fingerprint dont they pam like us thanks for this xx ppeter
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Snowflakes are amazing...no two alike, and yes, just like our fingerprints. And even beyond fingerprints, each person is unique and different...no two alike in all the world...amazing! Thanks Peter. Pam
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A marriage of the visual and audible. Very nice. Good luck!
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Thank you paulcreates!
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