I brush aside the dust to watch the scabs
slowly seeping as I press them;
I lick up the fluids
Why did I do it this time
-why won't there be a next
Forever had mislead me and I was bound
for this all along
No songs sent me on my way,
but I hear a rhythm deeply rooted
in this break of patterned flesh
Author notes
c. crash h.
man I really drew up a blank on this didn't I......
>_<
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A contest entry
- II. i'm only human ♥ by love tank x.
1150 points, ended November 18, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this. You have a great style.
I want to invite you to submit some poetry for consideration to the AP book project. Message me with some poems under 30 lines you'd like to see in print.
(Include a link to this one.
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Elizabeth
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truly.
i love you crash. i really need to write something with someone like you.
darling do you have yahoo instant messenger, msn or vampire freaks?
i do, and i need more time with you
i need to write
cause im falling apart inside too
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Hmm. This was really different I think. I really like writes that are based on your emotions and your life and things like that...this one seemed to serious and like, moral-y for me. I guess im just more of an abstract thought sort've person. But yeah, this was really good, I could see it like on a Transit Bus or something.
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I brush aside the dust to watch the scabs
Why did I do it this time
-why won't there be a next
I love your short writes
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"Why did I do it this time
-why won't there be a next"
Awe babe I really like this; and I love the point behind it. Great job and thanks for entering! I love you<3
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