Between a Wall and a Hard Place
Where shirts are discarded with haste
And soon to follow is your bra of black lace
I watch in awe as my clothing is removed with fluid grace
My bare body eager for a quick sex ed lesson behind the school
The air scalding hot even though it is 47 degrees cool
I could only imagine that my face made me look like quite the fool
As juicy mahogany lips envelope my large ebony tool
I know you love it when I hit it from the back
And every time I give that perfect bottom a little smack
With every push comes a resounding crack
So loud I thought you were an airplane and I was a gun raining flak
Finally like a storm we came
And the thunderous clicking of the heels of disdain
Anger that great, one could not feign
But we just laughed with no shame
Because it was our principal who came
Putting us truly between a wall and a hard place.......
Author notes
I don't know how good this piece is.... I'm okay with it I would just like to hear everyones thoughts. I hope y'all enjoy nonetheless... Picture #2 was used in writing this piece.
A contest entry
- ~* Hands On Healing *~ by Desire.
925 points, ended November 10, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Positive Criticism please....
Comments
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wow
i see why you wrote this and it's really good i loved reading it and imaging the mahogany women was me (is it me
idk i guess you'll have to tell me)
great job it's great for the fantasy
your baby girl
Ali
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry in our Group contest:
A Wall and a Hard Place
Oh My, Love the images You have brought forth with the element of rhyme
also
the last line grabbed and I dropped my drink
Because it was our principal who came
Putting us truly between a wall and a hard place.......
I can only imagine
Heightened energy could be felt throughout the entire piece, just building and building
Wow, everybody brought forth HEAT in this challenge. I will need CPR soon
Oy
Wonderful piece You have weaved!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing
Judging will be done shortly~~
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Funny ending
I liked this piece. The ending is cute, unexpected for such a piece. LOL. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the vivid descriptions and the rhymes. Great piece. - cgir0410
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