Pen to paper seems hard to do
I stopped creating my poems
The reason – is you
Time and space I filled with love
Neglected my gift from god above
I wanted to spend each second with you-
My reason for happiness my heart so true.
Tonight I sit in the here and now
Trying to show I love you, some how!
But how?
Author notes
havent been on in ages...... ive been suffering from writers block!
and feeling like im not a talented poet.....
i wrote this,its not my best but could do with some help in finishing it off
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very beautiful and sweet.
There are a million ways to show
someone how much you love and care
for them. I think that the best way
is through your heart and words. Lovely
work here Neena and keep it up! Thanks
a lot for sharing this here!
Jeremy0826 -
VERY BEAUTIFUL AND SO SWEET!!!!
Sometimes one gets to where they just cannot express just what they are feeling, the right words are there but cannot come out.
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Very good. Everybody has those times when you can't think of anything. I'm haveing that problem myself as of late. You are a talented poet, remeber that.
~Vision is the art of seeing things invisible. -Jonathan Swift.
It looks like you're looking to hard right now. Take a step back and it will come to you.
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