She said that she cared,
never before was there such emotion,
a life of pain till she came along.
Time in clasped loves arms,
for a girl that is different,
lost in the masses of society.
Then returned to worthless,
dregs that are tossed aside,
sundered emotions drain from this heart.
Why him not me?
Author notes
painting by mark nobriga
10 lines, pic inspired
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt PIF by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended November 3, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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what a piece you penned here my precious Bro.
wonderful job. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory
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well done my dear bro xx my fav lines that shined upon my spirit were:
dregs that are tossed aside,
sundered emotions drain from this heart.
Why him not me?
many loving blessings always xxx
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Great take on the prompt, truly unique and captivating... x
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Very well written take on the picture! "Sundered emotions drain from this heart." What a powerful line. Best wishes in the contest
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