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the Shell of Depression

the shell overcomes me,  when
People around seem so free

I walk and walk but fall upon
my ever so broken spiritual knee

The world seems happy,  but I am
not and that is just the way it
will always be

The imprint on this earth is and
will be only dust,  I feel within
my being as to creating life,  it has
been nothing but in just

Does not matter if Prozac covers my
emotion,  I still feel all that confused
commotion

Depression is within me,  that is why I
wish i was anyone but me, but when i am
sad as well as mad,  creation i do well
abstract art to me this is life and i feel
so much apart

If I am sad  or that if I am mad,  it is me
I know nothing else and that is just me

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  • Blossom Fairy
    December 26, 2007

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    You have spoken truly

    A fine poem that many can identify with and I send you my admiration today for speaking up.

  • piccola silver member
    November 13, 2007

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    prozac covers my emotion too; the thing is, I sometimes want to cry, but cannot...I hate that feeling worse than the sadness. It seems that all the prozac does is dull something inside me. thank you for this entry.