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Miss Don't Touch ME

Miss don't touch me
don't hug me
don't touch me
and don't you dare cuddle me
its all I ever want

but don't
don't hug me
don't touch me
just leave me

if you do
it will just
break my heart
again

Author notes

It's written for my ex boyfriend and to explain why I am Miss don't touch me.

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  • Bruce silver member
    February 10
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    Nice! It's a sort of I hate you, don't leave me poem, perhaps. Good job!

  • Simply Beautiful

    its a simple write,
    but ti's beautiful.
    You're a great writer,
    Annie Shadows

  • Tercarro
    November 4, 2008
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    Nice and simple

    nice and simple but totally different. I like this so you must be interesting.
    TC


  • hopelessly-broken
    November 5, 2007

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    ohh its soo sad hunni!!

    great write though. you keep letting those feeling sout! take care of youself..

    love you always
    HB


  • a means to an end
    November 5, 2007
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    awwwwww, thats so sad. i liked it it was a cute little write XD


  • PaiigeBARBIE
    November 4, 2007
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    aww this is so pretty.
    i really like this.
    [♥]good job bby.

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