What can I say
Both are wonderful boys
But both in their own ways broke my heart
One who said he loved me didn’t do anything
The other one won’t talk to me
But both I liked
What more can I say
Both have dark hair
And loving eyes
But both broke my heart in their own way
One wouldn't really answer my messages
One likes another girl
But still Sam said yes to a date
But never told his parents
Now I’m breaking my heart
To tell him I know who you like
And it’s not me
I want to say lets just be friends
And end it their
But Sam’s made a mess
And the one thing both boy’s
Played with something that takes
The longest time to heal
Is my heart
Both boys made my heart break
It’s now shattered
Into a thousand pieces
What can I say
Both broke my heart in their own way
Author notes
So far in my life I have had really bad boyfriends, so now m venting my feelings. Meridith Im sorry if I offened you in any way. But right know my heart in nothing and my feelings are hurt so Im really really really sad if you noticced Emma this is not WHY IM SAD or at least it's apart of the reason im sad but dont ask. I hate anbody who says get over it. IT TAKES TIE FOR A BROKEN HEART TO HEAL. so how ever says get over it I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A contest entry
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Thanks for entering. It sucks tons to like someone who doesn't like you back, but I suppose you just have to find a way to deal with it.
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I wasn't all that impressed with this.. sounds like a premature Alanis Morrisette, to be honest. Also I'm not sure how this ties into the picture...
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ummm option? quote? good poem, doesn't make alot of sence, but good
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I really like this poem! Good job venting your feelings.
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How did Ethan break your heart...? Nevermind.
The only reason I'm offended by this is that YOU SPELLED MY NAME WRONG!!!
M-E-R-E-D-I-T-H
thats ok though. Thank you so much for entering.
And, as Lise & Sasha said, who's the other girl? -
sad
other girl? nooo... yah, you have had pretty stinky bfs in the past. first there was that guy who dumped you for a brunette (or something?) then there was ethan, and now sam?! oh my gosh. i feel so bad for you. this is why i'm not dating until i go to byu, where the nice boys go to college. nice write, nice job venting ur feelings!
♥ sasha ♥
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no, i know why you're sad.
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oh noooooo!!! did you break up with sam???
i love this poem, it's so great, and I'm so sorry!!! who's the other girl?
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