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[ broken fucking souls, ]

broken fucking souls,
screaming in the torment and the pain,
of what they can see im going to do.

fear writhing and squerming in there bodies
screams echo of the walls,
not the normal way, these scream hold all feeling.

nothing remains but me- and them
more to the point,
me, them and pain.

all they will know will be pain,
no compassion no mercy,
and all i will feel.. is joy

breaking the normal life
breaking them,
got to love the pain..

hmm dark

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  • ms. kitty kat
    November 3, 2007
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    wow

    I absolutely love this poem. great job on writing this.
    the imagery that is used through out this, is great. my favorite stanza is:

    all they will know will be pain,
    no compassion no mercy,
    and all i will feel.. is joy

    thank you for sharing this with me. I enjoyed it very much.

    Kat