pulse racing
heart now chaotic
fantasies dance in your head
dreams washing over you
the old demons to control you
with pernicious hands
and zealous tongues
clense the fire from within
ectasy running right through you
desire burning your flesh
yearning with a taste of lust
blood rushing from your lips
lust in thy veins
touching you fevers my chronic desires
making my veins pulsate
with your sweet scent
with malevolent lips entwined
my body grows convulsing with your kiss
a simple touch sets fire from within
until I'm swimming in an sea of eternal Hell
lust is your sin
lust is my savior
i kiss you now
as those same demons control me
empower me with maniacal deeds
your touch becomes my needs
i thirst for your decadent touch
as desire burns in me
bleeding through all the lust that consumes
my soul
i need your blood to coax this fire
that burns through me
such an addiction as this
your kiss becomes ectasy
its in your touch
that makes lust in thy veins boil
Author notes
my username is: going to a funeral
A contest entry
- Whatever..just make it good. [astonish me] by borrowing.moonlight.
1000 points, ended June 30, 2008, 160 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice mix of vocab. I especially approve of the word pernicious. ^_^
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WOW... that is really REALLY good. i love your use of words here.
DAMN though if i didnt have to read that TODAY... =/
[ehh dont ask]
wow.. i really like this and good luck.
on any other day [not after yesterday] i would be EXULTING over this so im going to add it to the finalists because it truly is that good
i just happen to have made some very recent mistakes.
thank you for entering though ^^
keep writing! thats for sure
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well done
awesome write I love the intense feelings in it
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I really like how discriptive you were with the emotions in this without being completely over the top. My friend Blood89 is holding a vampire contest. She may like this. I think you should enter it and find out.
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Ok, I will try this. Thank you
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This is a great poem Laura-Pants. It is very erotic. *wink wink*
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