I remember my dear heart, aching at a time
then it finally caught up by the person of mime.
Hey! Wake up he said at me.
A phantom appears and put at a glee.
The time I'm afraid and felt sadness inside;
the time he appears and begin to wipe all my tears.
This was the happiest time, I said indeed.
For love begin to show and paddle a care.
It was a thought I think
that there maybe times we hide and fear.
But we can't tell, and no one will.
That there'll come a time that we felt unchanged.
That there will time for us to come
sadness will turn in its wonderful time
Together with someone, we fell known
and bind with time that gathered rhymed.
Time has come and I feel divine
Love comes at its first time
Jazzing me, summoned me
Making me free but keeping me in touch with glee.
Author notes
# 11
I remember my friend who gathered my tears and brought back the smile in my face.. He's someone I'll never forget to.
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It was an okay poem, but i had a really hard time reading it because of the background. Maybe you could change that somehow because i really don't see how i was supposed to read that.
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beautiful good luck
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This is a nicely written poem but it is very hard to read with that particular background. Thanks for entering
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this is a very pretty poem, very well written...
it's just too hard to see without highlighting...
cool pic
good luck in the contest and thanks forentering -
So it should be
Time is on your side young one. use it to your advantage & I love the graphics
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Excellent poem
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I really thank you for having such a good thought. Thanky poovyLou
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