I am running through such troubled times,
Costing lives and many dimes,
I need some closure, moving on,
Before this treasured life is gone,
I left behind so many friends,
Hope that I can make meet all ends,
To keep on moving, not stand-still,
So much that I need to fulfill,
No more must I be locked inside,
No by such rules must I abide,
I need to reach out to new things,
See what this new journey brings,
Goodbye to those who have to leave,
Never would this be a repreive,
I'll miss you for you are a star,
Can't belive you'll be so far,
Good luck to you in all your dreams,
Though mine are now ripped at the seams,
I want this new road to bring me love,
Before I depart to the world above,
I'll make it through for I am strong,
I know that my heart is never wrong,
You will remain inside my heart,
But I know that we must part,
I'm gonna miss you Josie!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxx
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest # 1 Of Departing With My Points. by Poetryintheblood.
1700 points, ended November 4, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I don't know who you are as your name won't be known till the end, but thank you for your most beautiful write for me, it has touched my heart deeply, and it seems you are someone who knows me very well, so I will thank you again after the contest, Josie
