Titillate my perceptions
Apply flame to the desire
Reshape my belief in you
I want surety to persist
Enlightened as one
On our joy-ride
And during our misfortunes
Embrace my brittle heart
Transport me to my inner descendent
I crave to be me
For you
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very nice
Very unique and with powerful words.. good job -
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very nice
Thank you so much
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Out Standing! I crave to be me for you...sighs...now this is love as it should be
Thank you so much for sharing with me and for entering
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wow
This is incredible... I love it.. I am a firm believer of fewer powerful words. Great write!
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First of all, I have to say I love your name, reason being a nickname I have had for years is Mato, as I am addicted to toMATO sauce, lol
So yay . Secondly Thank you very much for reading this piece
I like the punch behind less more powerful words too
I appreciate your lovely comment and hope to return the favour
Cindy
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Strong emotions expressed in powerful words. You have a flair for getting to the heart of the matter and I enjoyed reading a thought provoking piece.
Take care
Margaret
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A poem of substance. You want him to be yourself. That is true love with an intence desire. You give punch, that others rarely give..thank you for sharing
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Thanks Venugopal, your comments always mean a lot to me and keep my muse alive
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I will always be here for the one I love. Your poem make me think of this line. Thanks!
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Thank you Ruthy Fruity, I love to see a new reader and love even more that my words can be apreciated
Thats a great line and one I live by for my man too
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