Come to bed lover of mine,
I wait in my see-through negligee.
I pose sex, now! For you.
Lay me down gently.
Open me up and find your treasure.
Guide my hands to your hardness while,
You tantalise my every sense.
Let us roam the sexual seas as one
and release our orgasms together.
Let me have…
Let us find…
Sexual healing!
Author notes
does this make you happy!
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Hands On Healing *~ by Desire.
925 points, ended November 10, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - inspire me by uziphiel.
450 points, ended December 15, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i do not know maybe i should of said no using the name of song titles in your poem but i didn't that just made me laugh sorry
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BEAUTIFUL...
I have definitely been there... laying back to let hands of healing bring me to holistic wellness through orgasmic therapy
xoxo Sacrificial
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry in our Group contest:
I need, You need, We all need.....
First I wanted to say, no need to apologize for I imagined You put forth Your best at the time You wrote this and I do Appreciate the time You took to pen for this contest~
Stress can make it difficult to pen anything but I take into consideration You penned during a time that most would put their quill down
Love the images You have brought forth also
the desire from within to please Your partner
through Your Touch...
I could feel the want throughout the entire piece
Oy, everybody brought forth HEAT in this challenge. I will need CPR soon
Love the line:
Let me have…
Let us find…
Oy
Wonderful piece You have weaved
!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing
Judging will be done shortly~~
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Psssss hot! Lol...Such things are just what the doctor ordered for two people in love. Well done, and keep poking away...I mean, perfecting your style! You know what I mean. Lol!
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. well a pat on the back, that you are the first in the contest to take the time to read and comment on one of my works. I hold that in a very high regard
Definetly what the doctor ordered
You made me laugh with your - and keep poking away...I mean perfecting your style, So thanks. I do appreciate someone making the pun intended, so to speak and making me giggle
Glad you enjoyed it MJ
Cindy
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When I read this my sensations have come to the brim.Your poetry really provokes..thanks for revealing the body through the mind
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I like to hope I can provoke things in people through my words, SO YAY
Thanks Venugopal
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I think that your words could heal anyone. Very seductively expressed passion. My best wishes to you in the contest.
Margaret
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Margaret :)
Aw thanx darl
I try, lol
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