Illusionary visions
fused with great,
powerful things
left yet to uncover
Woven symbolic chants
everything in its own unrealized dome
a wisp of fear over the power within
but I've banished fear itself.
"I banish fear"
Odd did it feel
facades of uncertainty
cast away all that
whisper thoughts out loud
The stars exploded in the sky
everything was then alright
all so bright
clear and infinite
Paths needed to follow are now clear to me
blessed to dance
under the *Blood Moon's* shining light
Awed by every flower in blossom
Breathe of life endowed in my fingertips
magick even in nature
simple and incredible yet unrecognized
Magick,
feel its intensive power
swirl around the entire universe
and experience its connection with life and creation
Author notes
option number 4. I spell magick the same way and this is the orginal title.
A contest entry
- Treasured Ink by Prison of Lyme.
475 points, ended January 1, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options, big points, several winners. by Willowhaunt.
1000 points, ended January 16, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is great. I love every line.
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You're awesome! I like this a lot. <
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>.> I'm glad you did... your pretty awesome yourself ^^,
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Wow! This was really good. It tell us all about we're we as wiccan's come from. "I banish fear" I liked that. Showing us, the readers how you really have the power within. "*Blood Moon's*" is so pretty. (& brings powerful times for a great spell) Also "feel its intensive power" some that think we are evil are really afraid of what you said in that. But EVERYONE has power, it is the truly divine that can use it & control it without fear. Thank you for sharing such a lovely piece. Congratulations on BOTH of your trophies! In Love & Light... Blessed Be... my friend! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Thank you so much Iridessa!
Blessed be always
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hummz,, very fine writing material ,, liked
thanx for wellcome 
and you seem a very good writer
takecare
and keep smiling
by
The poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Maybe I'm just reading it wrong, but the line "everything i its own unrealized dome" isn't making much sense to me grammatically. Care to help me out? lol. Yeah, I know I'm an idiot.
I enjoyed all of the magical and powerful synonyms you wrote with. great job, and you are well deserving of your trophies! -
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I'm sorry that was supposed to be "in its unrealized doeme". Seemed to have forgotten to type "n". Thanks for pointing that out. =)
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I can see the wonderful immagery and the depth bringing the impact of the message..I love this write..thanks for sharing it...
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Very well done. I love this piece; I think you have captured the essence of magick. I love the flow of it and your choice of words. Well written.
Keep Quilling,
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Great piece, portrayed some lovely imagery in it. Good luck in the contest with it
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nice
good luck in the contest!
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