I look at the clouds and think of you
Wonder if this was ever true
Lied to me once, twice then more
I can trust you no more
I knew from the start
It wouldn't work
But now I'm
Over
You
Author notes
A Nonet
I've never really written form poetry before so this was quite a challenge for me...
A contest entry
- Round 3 ~ of 5 - ONLY 15 will advance to the FINAL ROUND by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Terrific nonet. I have never written one of these but they look like fun. You have wriiten from my life and wish yo luck in the contest.
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great job =)
and congrats on making it to the third round !!!
hope to see you're entry for the final =)
good luck
seej
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Hey Searchin'~ for never writing form before you did a fantastic job! I did enjoy the piece, and yet your words are so true. I reads as a nice smooth piece. Your syllable count is perfect! You did a terrific job!
Congrats on making it to this round ~ good luck to you on the rest~
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