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Sweet Innocence

Rain falls, and so does your face;

lightning splits the sky, followed by the thunder's boom!

Sadly you glare where the unfair

sun has hid, through rivulets

that slide down the glass door.

~

Suddenly your frown's erased,

replaced with a smile that's forgotten any gloom;

your fair hair flies in the air,

as does your small doll's. "Let's

go shopping!", you implore.

~

Slipping in our socks, we race!

pushing plastic carts far down the hallway to your room.

And while we're there you'll brush her hair,

and give you two more bracelets -

or maybe three or four...

 

Author notes

This poem is dedicated my dear little friend, Callie-Gwen

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute to what is obviously a very bright and lovely young flower taht is close to your soul