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Fairies, Butterflies, Ponies, Angels, and Kittens with Wings

Just visiting your page to wish you a Happy Birth…
aah, scat, fairies!

and where did all these flowers come from?

I can’t find my way…
and angels, angels everywhere…

what a birthday party…
there's butterflies, kittens, and Easter eggs…

Oooh, I stepped on an egg, sorry, big feet here…
I’ll glue it back together…

Well, I better get started...



Renee, Renee,
a kitten with wings,
to whom birds sing
from their nests in the spring,
for whom fairies dance
and to whom ponies prance
when they are in need
of your loving energy…

could it be the angels know
why your butterflies glow?
Why your kittens mew?
Why your Easter egg is on my shoe?

It's because we’ve all come to sing,

Happy Birthday to You!
Happy Birthday to You!
Happy Birthday Dear Renee,
Happy Birthday to You!

  (see it...!)

OK, make a wish,
blow out the candles

  (try it...!)

open your presents,
cut the cake,
put on the music,

  (hear it...!)

turn on the disco lights,
don your glitter dress
I’ll squeeze into my polyester suit
and we'll the party started!






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Happy Birthday, Mother Dear! (AP's first interactive birthday poem, I'll bet...!)

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  • Matt Holck
    January 30, 2008
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    light
    love the dancing and prancing


    • wbiro gold member
      January 30, 2008
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      thanks, actually got me to do some improving here... now how did you end up here... ah, the 'Return the Favor' button I'll wager...! I'll have to try it, wonder what you'll have...


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    November 25, 2007

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    Thankyou for entering this contest for my wonderful Grandma's (poetryality) Birthday and I apologise for the delay in judging.
    Best of luck to you.
    Lil


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 24, 2007

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    you always offer a surprise wayne and this was such a delight to see and so different i think than anything else offered to renee for her birthday this was very sweet and i see that she loved it

    you know, it's a good thing we aren't married anymore because if we were it would be all confused. rennee your mother, my sister, you my husband, how would that all work again? best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • poetryality silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Bootiful!

    I absolutely love what you've done with my gift dear son. I always look to find something exciting and unique when I come to your pages and this my dear is very different. I do love yellow, especially flowers. I also love kittens, until they become cats. LOL All the winged creatures of the world are my favorites as well.

    Yes, yes...it takes a know it all son to know it all. You know me well dear one. Thank YOU ever so much for always making me smile, and for this generous birthday gift.

    I LOVE YOU ♥



    Mom


  • Anna Emkah
    November 3, 2007

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    A nice present for Poetryality.
    Congratulations for your AP mother.
    My birthday is this month too... so... lol.
    Anna.

    P.S. I guess you have better things to do!

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