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Little feet

Little feet go pit, pat, pit, pat
on cold kitchen tiles
I hold teddy's hand so tight
he barely smiles
The dreams wont let me sleep
so to the kitchen I must creep
mommy and daddy were so loud
A small spoon of ice-cream
will warm my little feet
fluffy starts crying
and teddy won't eat
Little feet go pit, pat, pit, pat
into my special cave
under the kitchen table
teddy and fluffy will be safe
The moon is frowning
through the window pain
I had better wash this bowl
I could never explain
Just a moment to let my friends rest
fluffy is on my feet
he is the best
I cannot sleep here
mommy and daddy wont understand
why does fluffy want to cry so
why can't teddy let go my hand

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  • Angelic Princess21
    November 3, 2007
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    awww this was really good. thank you for entering the contest. and best of luck to you.
    Angel