Bright and cheery full of life.
Wonder and amazement surrounds me.
Never afraid to have a bold brisk smell.
Even at night you can spot me.
Feel free to fill your senses and to brighten your day.
I am yellow and you can never get enough.
Author notes
not quite where I thought I was going but sometimes they have a life of their own
A contest entry
- smells like yellow by Cat.
600 points, ended November 4, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cute!Good Luck in the contest.
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LOL .. this is soooooooooooo much better.. what a lovely poem pops out from the abyss!- i really like this piece and so glad you posted
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Yes, when our muse takes over, w nver know where it goes - nothing at all like we figured at the beginning. Liked where this one went.
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i can't get past your color scheme here.. it is horrendous- you might want to check your monitor to figure out why your sensibilities didn't stop you from posting..
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sorry about didn't mean to blind anyone lol I wanted a cheery color not a mind maddening one!!! hope you enjoy
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