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Hear out H

Heart hopeful of harmony,
host of heapful hortation,
hall of hoi polloi
heeding each others wishes.

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My letter H...Won't it be great if all lived harmoniously?

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  • Mallig gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    This is great, I love what you did with the letter H here. It truly would be great if the hoi polloi (love that) could live together in harmony, what a beautiful hope. Thanks for your entry!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    great alliteration in this piece, oh for harmony I said... wonderful piece well crafted. Goodluck in this contest

    Karen


  • Melodies
    November 2, 2007

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    Oh, what fun!

    Your happy heartfelt "H" hops with harmony! A darling poem that makes me smile!


    • crimsondew
      November 2, 2007
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      Keep up the smile..That is two on my- side..Soon I will take on the world with their agreement on this piece....

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    this is beautiful and yes it would be great thanks for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes


    • crimsondew
      November 2, 2007
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      Glad you agree...now all I have to do is get the rest of the world agreeing on this....

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