Flickering fantasy
as feather, floating
fingertips finding my face
flushed,
fears fading,
heart fluttering
feeling fondness;
facsimile of love
fervor flowing,
fondling in feverish flush...
~infatuation~
fuels the flame.
♥♥
Author notes
"F" words
A contest entry
- Quickie Fun (I hope) – Pick a letter! by Mallig.
525 points, ended November 3, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow,
Excellent piece, loved the imagery sis!
Thanks for sharing, and congrates on the bronze.
Much love, Bro Timothy
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Fantastic flow and fervent feeling! This is very well done, you really created a wonderful piece. Thank you for this fine entry!
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Great write on f good luck in the contest pick a letter by mallig
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Very well written, I like the words you chose. Great job and good luck in this contest. Much Love
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this is excellent - I like the F words you chose, this poem is hot - infatuation at the end is such a perfect word -love those last lines..
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Nice but LOL!
Lmao! well Aunt Lynda you certain know how to wrote F words LOL! any ways this is just a very well penned poem and it has very good flow through out and its a very interesting poem as well. any ways good work and keep it up and good luck in the contest.
Sincerely, Paul
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