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I'm Not Your Girl?

I heard it on the wind
that you no longer cared
that you had found another
and didn't think to tell me
we were over

Maybe it was all in my head
maybe we never were really together
maybe I had made it all up
so I could just feel like I was loved
by you of all people

I don't hate you
even though you have now made me cry
I wish you happiness
I really do

Author notes

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! He doesn't love me!!! I'm gonna go drown my sorrow in some pizza...*cries*
11/02/07 8:33 pm

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  • checkmate
    November 4, 2007

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    wow. this is exactly how I felt too.

    you have written this beautifully, and your piece tugged at my heartsrings. the last stanza was simply beautiful.

    great work. s,
    char


  • Myth Of Twilight
    November 3, 2007

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    a sad poem truly it was well writen and i loved the work i think i uderstand one great write and i have been there befor i fell your sorrow


  • hypnorocker
    November 3, 2007
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    sounds like it hurts a little... don't worry these things happen, then they're over