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Sublime Sentiments

Sweet symphonies saturate
the seasonal sky.
Shadows sashay secretly
sweeping silently on
the sidewalk.
Stars smile serenely
suggesting serendipity.
Succulent silk slithers
on shoulders;
Savory smooches satiate
sighing sublime sentiments

Author notes

Pick a letter: I chose 's' obviously *smile*

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  • Mallig gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    Sensational, stunning! I really enjoyed this, it has great imagery. I loved "Shadows sashay secretly
    sweeping silently on
    the sidewalk." Thanks for your entry!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 3, 2007
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    Excellent i wish you the best of luck in the contest


  • islekine gold member
    November 2, 2007
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    This is Excellent!

    Best of luck in the contest...well penned!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    Holy moly I see lots of S's this is good sweety goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love always