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Him and Her Part 3: A Trilogy to a Happy Ending

When we last left him and her they were running along the beach, let's see what shall happen next:

As they ran along the beach she kept thinking of when her mother would come in and ruin what little she has left with him;
She smiled as she remembered that her mother wouldn't be ruining anything for her any more;
She squeezed his hand tighter and then let go, taking up speed;
He ran after her;
She tripped and fell onto the soft sand;
He stopped a few feet from her;
He laughed, she laughed with him;
At that moment everything seemed right in the world;
He sat down next to her;
For some time the just stared out into the ocean, watching the waves pass by;
She got up and hollowly walked closer to the crashing waves;
He stayed where he was a watched her go closer to the waves;
She suddenly sat down, just where the waves couldn't reach her;
He walked to where she was and sat next to her;
She looked at him, her eyes shimmering with the tears that were about to spill over;

They both just gaze into eachother's eyes for what seems like an eternity;

Suddenly he looked back at the ocean, the sun was starting to set, casting a beautiful range of colors reflecting against the ocean's icy water;

She moved his face to look at hers;

She kisses his cheek, not wanting to leave the moment where it is;

He kisses her lips wishing the moment could last forever;

She pulls away, her eyes brim with tears;

She turns away from him;

He takes her into his arms;

She cries on his shoulder, fearing the soon to come.....

 

                            To Be Continued............(Again)............

Author notes

This is the third out of many that are soon to come, so watch out for the fourth titled "Will the Happy Ending Ever Come?" Hope you've read the first and secound before this one, or you'll be really lost....
(trust me, they get waaaaaaaay better as they go along, this is how I wrote in 2007, part 10 was written in 2009. My writing
has changed a LOT, and it will get better in the future. Just keep reading )

link to part 4: http://allpoetry.com/poem/3639214

I hope this is a good third part, please comment!!!

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Comments

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  • way to leave me hanging.....thats really good


  • Nephlim
    December 22, 2007

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    What's soon to come?
    I wanna know! Did I miss something or is this a cliff hanger you evil person .
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Waiting for the next one

    Im trying to keep up and its great so far


  • warrior-eagle
    December 8, 2007

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    Awwww,
    I can imagine myself there,
    hehe.
    This is amazing!
    WOW!
    Amazing!
    you are very fantastic writer,
    how old are you?(wait am judging sorrry!)

    ..Simply Me♥


  • James R
    November 29, 2007
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    Amazing write my friend I will have to read these all when i am not at work


  • Falling.Again...Xx
    November 27, 2007
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    Again, wow! This is a great series and needs to keep comin' I love it!!!

    B♥


  • Astral Flare
    November 26, 2007
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    Nice. Can't wait to read part four.
    -Tim


  • And Hyetal
    November 25, 2007

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    I'm ready for the 4th part!!! This is a great love series! I love the setting of the beach in all of them. Now I'm off to read #4!

    Always,
    Cassie


  • Bohemianwriter
    November 4, 2007
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    greeeeeeerat!

    number 4 pleeeeeeeeease!!!!!, i cant take this anymore!!! quick! number 4! A.S.A.P!!


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 2, 2007
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    Very visual write...I'm there on the sand.x

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