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Forbidden Cookie

For me to live is to love
And to love is to live
Take me somewhere where this can be true
Help me find someone like you
Cuz right now you are
That forbidden cookie in a jar
That mommy told me not to touch
For if I did I’d have to much
Come little friend and help me reach
I need to know that you are with me to teach
My little darling by my side
Just goes to show that I have some pride
Take me somewhere where this can be true
Help me find someone like you
Cuz right now you are
That forbidden cookie in the jar
Sweet child keep your innocence re-echoes in my ear
Of course I’ll listen and I’ll hear
For I know what happens when
Mommy finds the cookie jar broken on the floor
Then it’s time to hit the door
I Love you little one don’t you see
And that’s why I don’t want you in the cookie jar
Doing something that I told you not to
Don’t touch sweet child you’ll get burned
Daddy won’t be happy when you wake
Wake him up with that tummy ache
Now take your puppy and get back to bed
Listen to mommy listen to what I said
For taking that forbidden cookie
Giving me a reason to want to live
Also kept me from wanting to give
That cookie now I’ll love forever
All because no one would I let judge without reason
But when you’re in the right season
I’ll open the cookie jar for you
And you can find what I found to be true
For me to love is to live and to live is to love
Daddy took me to that place
I found it to be true
And that is why I have you

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Just in case some of you are wondering this is based off the picture and it's what came to mind

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I like the metaphors and imagery you used. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 11, 2008
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    I like this, it flowed nicely and was fun to read through.


  • Stars of Hope
    July 2, 2008

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    Aww...so sweet! I love it!

    Luv ya oodles!
    Courtney


  • Valentine82
    November 2, 2007
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    Confusing

    I like it but i wonder what it is meant to say exactly, but i do like it.


  • Angelic Princess21
    November 2, 2007
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    good job. thank you for your time and for entering. best of luck to you in the contest.
    Angel

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