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[ Such an innocent girl ]

Such an innocent girl

Living in a harsh and cruel world

No mother No father to comfort her when she cries

Only her dolly and her doggy keep her in smiles

She enjoys the thrill of sneaking down at night

Just for a cookie, a small little bite

But to no avail the girl will fail

as always because of her careers

"get to bed little Annie"

but she doesnt understand

these people are only trying to give her a loving helping hand

Poor little Annie who finds comfort in her doll

A cookie is something delightful  for her, but what she doesnt know

is that there are no cookies, in the jar

Her careers put it there so they could catch her at night

Hopefully to give her a fright

and then she would remember that a cookie is not a delight

and therefore Annie was taught a lesson in life.


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  • Angelic Princess21
    November 2, 2007

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    good write i really enjoyed reading this. thank you for you time and thank you for entering. best of luck to you