Septum sizzling
Plastic melting
cast iron corroding
Eyeball etching
Caustic, ozone depleting
Cornered feline's indelible mark
Irretrievably hidden primal pungance
(smile)
"...here kitty, kitty."
A contest entry
- smells like yellow by Cat.
600 points, ended November 4, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yes, that smell is sure disgusting, especially made by the nbeighbour's cats who know just where to go in my flower bed. Easy to read and understand these sentiments expressed in these lines.
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nothing worse than the assault of cat urine on the senses-
this is cute and fresh- a clever, clever take on
the contest concept
thanks for entering and welcome to AP -
very clever...
well done on all counts
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