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Countryside

The country road
That so many say they travel
Is empty
No small toy cars
No insect sized people
Trees scattered around
Like an infant placed them
A quilt is made
From the patches of land






I hope it will keep someone warm

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  • MJ Forgives
    November 26
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    Really interesting poem. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
    -Jess


  • Izu
    November 2, 2007
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    Nice, exactly what i was looking for actually.
    Good luck in the contest.