the most hopeful image ever
you never know who will take it
maybe someone that will change your life
change your mind
someone that will touch your heart
enrich your soul
someone that will quench the hunger in your soul
hunger for understanding
hunger for wisdom
someone that may answer all your questions
and finally make you understand life
A contest entry
- Who can Object by Legend.
1800 points, ended November 15, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good write.
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Very well said..
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good job
A lot of thought was placed in here...mac
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Short and swet- I loved the second line "you never know who will take it" -great job
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I like the optimistic take you used with this piece.
The last lines remind me of the saying, "when the student is ready the teacher will appear", good job!
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A chair that is empty always seems
to be inviting. Certainly, it has invited you to write verse. Indeed, someone may sit in it and change your life, ass you wisely say. 
Lyndon.
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I think we all look for this kind of person to fill that empty chair. Nicely written and well thought out. Good luck with this lovely write.
Shaz xx
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wow!
this piece is so brilliant! I tried writing on this topic and my mind went blanck. what a great job! lovely perspective.
we never know who can change our lives and the way you made it a chais instead of inside your heart is very smart and a joy to read. best of wishes in the contest! 
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puts me in mind of 'Are You Lonesome tonight' by Elvis Presley. An empty chair, to me would be a lonely sight - but I applaud your positive attitude as you see it waiting to be filled. Good Luck with this. Von
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There could be so many takes on this object You have produce one that give a great deal of anticipation of what could occur I like that A very enjoyable read,sadly i ended up wanting more but they always say leave you audience wanting A very fine read Good luck in the contest
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nice poem
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what we all...
...desire at one time or another. the search for what the meaning of life is. very good ,and thoghtful piece!
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a wonderful idea...
...to have someone who can do all those things would be a great help in life. The last line is the cruncher. It would be an easy life if it were true.
I like the way you have a different thought for each line.
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