Click! The camera of truth flashes on
And black and white is my only vision
You are not here; I could not face the dawn –
Blurry is the resolution.
My image of present is pixelized
Smiles are broken; you’re not here by my side
I miss you my friend; pictures sympathize
My emptiness is hard to hide.
The lens of future widens it focus
Captures sceneries with different hues
But our friendship is a special locus
Where you will always be my muse.
Author notes
#7 I am missing my best friend so much...second-born
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Comments
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The title is wonderful, giving a glimpse of
what will follow; but not the metaphor so
intelligently used here. A tribute with feeling
that many will relate to. Blue
PS-"The lens of future widens it focus" should
read its
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Wow this is really good!
I really like it!
Its so sad, but it sounds so true.
My favorite part was,
My image of present is pixelized
Smiles are broken; you’re not here by my side
I miss you my friend; pictures sympathize
My emptiness is hard to hide.
Because the image of present is pixleize- is just sooo different.
Smiles are broken; you're not here by my side- is so true and sad, when your missing your best friend.
I miss you my friend; pictures sympathize
My emptiness is hard to hide - is just like wow, you really miss them, and the emptiness wont go away!
This is great!
Good job, and good luck in my contest!!
-Erin
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