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First Kiss

Our first kiss
So soft and sweet

I never imangined it would be our last
I never imangined you would do this to me

I never thought I could hurt this much
I never thought I would lose so many tears over you

I thought you were suppost to stop the tears not start them
I thought your big green eyes could never lie to me

You didnt think I knew about her
But I do

I can never forgive you for ruining my life
I can never trust anyone any more

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  • future dead poet
    November 16, 2007

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    how are you going to talk shit on me for not matching backgrounds when you have this shit up? so i guess by your standards, this is a shitty poem? think about it

  • Momma To Be
    November 2, 2007

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    nice

    Ok this is good but not trusting anyone ever again is stupid. Guys are jerks and they all suck so we just got to get over it. They will never stop hurting you until you finde the right one and that could take years. So i will always be here through every guy you have problems with and when they hurt you i will be here to kisk there asses. love ya later