on the other side of the world
trying to keep track of everything
not to forget
everyday life back home
try to be understanding
people feel sleepy
and I need to give way
but it is not so easy
with no telephone
I cannot hear the lovely voices
of my friends
and right here
I need to plan very carefully
even planning goes haywire
and a person not always
does the same things
at a fixed time
but I'll be home soon
but maybe it's better
to be far away
maybe it isn't
I am just glad
to know I
am in someone's thoughts
A contest entry
- One Whole Year by Death of the Author.
600 points, ended November 13, 2007, 49 entries
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Comments
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Aww that's a idea...you're always in someone's thoughts. Nice write, I like the indecisive nature of it as we often do not know what to do with our lives, ranging from the small (shall I have a chocolate or blueberry muffin) to the huge (what do I want to do for a job - how am I going to get there).
This is a sweet write. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck x take care x

