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in someone's thoughts

on the other side of the world
trying to keep track of everything
not to forget
everyday life back home

try to be understanding
people feel sleepy
and I need to give way

but it is not so easy
with no telephone
I cannot hear the lovely voices
of my friends
and right here
I need to plan very carefully

even planning goes haywire
and a person not always
does the same things
at a fixed time

but I'll be home soon
but maybe it's better
to be far away
maybe it isn't

I am just glad
to know I
am in someone's thoughts

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  • Death of the Author
    November 3, 2007

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    Aww that's a idea...you're always in someone's thoughts. Nice write, I like the indecisive nature of it as we often do not know what to do with our lives, ranging from the small (shall I have a chocolate or blueberry muffin) to the huge (what do I want to do for a job - how am I going to get there).

    This is a sweet write. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck x take care x