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Haiku A

An Aphrodite
Beautiful as the spring leaves
Lusts promise of hope

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Aphrodite

A contest entry

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  • Death of the Author
    November 3, 2007

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    Aww this contest is getting some great entries! Beautiful as the spring leaves indeed. Good luck and take care x


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 3, 2007

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    This is an interesting perspective mixing nature and human nature. Nicely done.

    Dennis


  • Kuranya gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    Well done on a great entry to this contest, as beautiful as the spring leaves, it leaves a gentle though in the readers mind, well done

    Karen


  • NoWayJo
    November 2, 2007

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    Your entry has been posted to the Contest-Page, Abba.

     

    There's such a gentle calm and serenity you have drawn in these three lines that's as lovely as the goddess Aphrodite herself.  Very unique theme drawn on the alphabet-letter "A"--Especially since I was hoping no one would write an expected "A/Apple" haiku!  This was unexpected and a delight to read, and thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

     

    Jo