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A promise

a promise
that i thought you'd keep

words
that shouldn't have been said

a vow
that i'll make

a promise to myself
to not love you again

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  • Yemassee gold member
    September 11

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    That is the changes one takes when they start a relationship someone is likely to get hurt and add to that your ages and it's a caustic combination. Hopefully all worked out fine however.


  • freespirit51
    November 14, 2007

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    AWESOME WRITE!! Girl this comes right out of a chapter in my lifes book. You hit the nail on the head with this for sure..Great write.